かわいい悪魔 [Kawaii Akuma] - Hiro Madarame, 斑目ヒロ
Ok. This is one of those yaoi's that is so close to being something that I would love, but it's lacking heart (and some other things).

First off, it begins with rape--or the rather the forced-seduction yaoi rape, but...come on. It's rape.

But even if we were going to set that aside as "yaoi rape" and something that doesn't seem to be traumatizing or even wrong in the world Madarame has put her characters in, there's still a few more things that are just meh.

Akiyoshi is an airhead to the point of obnoxiousness. In this particular dynamic, with Naruse being such an overbearing asshole, I wish Akiyoshi had a bit more of a spine. And what exactly does Naruse love about Akiyoshi? There's some level of affection missing, or rather it doesn't seem like Naruse is ever concerned with Akiyoshi's happiness.

I don't think yaoi artists put enough stock in showing kindness and affection towards the uke. Anyway, I'm rambling.

My main issue is what an asshole Naruse is.